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On black i have a team made of: a Janovy, that water monkey Hiyappu, a Choroneko cat, a Pidove/Mamepato and a Kurumiru (that bug caterpillar dressed in a leaf). Left the cat at the daycare. Got to find plasma grunt through giant city. I might get lost there X_X... And i thought Giratina's domain in Platinum was hard to navigate in...

Btw, i started reading the deviant art and from 1st chapter... your character likes men. O.o
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On black i have a team made of: a Janovy, that water monkey Hiyappu, a Choroneko cat, a Pidove/Mamepato and a Kurumiru (that bug caterpillar dressed in a leaf). Left the cat at the daycare. Got to find plasma grunt through giant city. I might get lost there X_X... And i thought Giratina's domain in Platinum was hard to navigate in...

Btw, i started reading the deviant art and from 1st chapter... your character likes men. O.o
I put the "despite" for a reason! T_T
You'll see after V =.=
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I put the "despite" for a reason! T_T
You'll see after V =.=
To show that the character is a man. X))))))))))))))))
I have no real main character in my novel though. There are so many that i can't actually choose who is the main. O.o
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To show that the character is a man. X))))))))))))))))
I have no real main character in my novel though. There are so many that i can't actually choose who is the main. O.o
Hmm you could give each one his own story...
Like a bunch of sagas coming together to create one big story.
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Hmm you could give each one his own story...
Like a bunch of sagas coming together to create one big story.
Well see the links in my signature, they each play their roles but even though Ray seems to be the main char, he's actually messing up and other people have to fix his mistakes. Even his best friend "fixes" him...
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Well see the links in my signature, they each play their roles but even though Ray seems to be the main char, he's actually messing up and other people have to fix his mistakes. Even his best friend "fixes" him...
*dislikes Yaoi <.<*
You're a mecha type, eh?
I get so many stories into my head every day T_T
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*dislikes Yaoi <.<*
You're a mecha type, eh?
I get so many stories into my head every day T_T
What's it got to do with Yaoi? I don't like yaoi.
And i kinda like sci-fi stuff but even though i use a lot of robots and stuff, the story focuses on the lives of characters and the attempt to beat the tyrants.
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What's it got to do with Yaoi? I don't like yaoi.
And i kinda like sci-fi stuff but even though i use a lot of robots and stuff, the story focuses on the lives of characters and the attempt to beat the tyrants.
Interesting, a losing battle or even?
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Mistook that for a yaoi hint.

Interesting, a losing battle or even?
No, i meant fixes in a different way. Still a bad way and with no sexual connotations. Not a fan of male on male fiction.
Well so far in 3rd volume they lose a lot to the bad guys. Lots of ppl die, the survivors aren't doing too well... When i started writing i never thought they'd end up so bad. O.o
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No, i meant fixes in a different way. Still a bad way and with no sexual connotations. Not a fan of male on male fiction.
Well so far in 3rd volume they lose a lot to the bad guys. Lots of ppl die, the survivors aren't doing too well... When i started writing i never thought they'd end up so bad. O.o
When I have time I'll read it, most likely tomorrow.
I can probably help you with certain parts of the storyline o.o
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When I have time I'll read it, most likely tomorrow.
I can probably help you with certain parts of the storyline o.o
If you can help with spotting any mistakes, please. My friend Tristen helped with vol 2 and 3 but he didn't check 1 much. Currently working on 3rd. Wanted to revive 1 character but then Tristen said that rather let the dead stay dead. Had in mind turning said char into a cyborg too and be turned against his friends, but my friend told me that it's better not to do that.

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If you can help with spotting any mistakes, please. My friend Tristen helped with vol 2 and 3 but he didn't check 1 much. Currently working on 3rd. Wanted to revive 1 character but then Tristen said that rather let the dead stay dead. Had in mind turning said char into a cyborg too and be turned against his friends, but my friend told me that it's better not to do that.
To be honest, I think your friend is right since it is overused...
But if you really want him revived, you just do a bit of both.
Heres an example: A group of scientists are working on a superior AI for a cyborg that can help fight the humans. However for the AI, they need superior genes that will co-operate with it.
Now, if that character has had any mechanical arms, nanomachines or operated something major, make something up saying his genes accepted the change a lot quicker than a normal human.
Seeing this, the scientists collected his DNA and put some of his genes with the AI to see if it co-operated, which it does.
So they create a cyborg stronger than any other, however this is not the character, it is a being created from parts of his DNA combined with a machine.
Human features? Up to you.
Like a newborn baby, the AI understands nothing about the new world and kills its creators, destroying all evidence of its existence.
What you do with it is up to you, whether it turns against the main characters or joins them.
A cool idea would be to hide it's personal history in pieces, so no one knows it is related to the character who died. I'll leave it to you o.o
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To be honest, I think your friend is right since it is overused...
But if you really want him revived, you just do a bit of both.
Heres an example: A group of scientists are working on a superior AI for a cyborg that can help fight the humans. However for the AI, they need superior genes that will co-operate with it.
Now, if that character has had any mechanical arms, nanomachines or operated something major, make something up saying his genes accepted the change a lot quicker than a normal human.
Seeing this, the scientists collected his DNA and put some of his genes with the AI to see if it co-operated, which it does.
So they create a cyborg stronger than any other, however this is not the character, it is a being created from parts of his DNA combined with a machine.
Human features? Up to you.
Like a newborn baby, the AI understands nothing about the new world and kills its creators, destroying all evidence of its existence.
What you do with it is up to you, whether it turns against the main characters or joins them.
A cool idea would be to hide it's personal history in pieces, so no one knows it is related to the character who died. I'll leave it to you o.o
It was more like this:
Said character is no longer able to be found by the good guys, but the bad guys could find him (having the technology) and since they already used human minds for their drones, they could turn the char into a cyborg, erase his mind but also make the mistake to give him the power to read minds so he is able to put pieces of the puzzle together and figure out who his friends are, who he was and who the bad guys really are. Then he would turn against the bad guys but never reveal who he is to anyone and live as a traveler for the rest of his life. Said character had lost everything he had anyway though so that would be sad.
I also wanted to not mention who the new soldier would be but Tristen would figure it out since it was my favorite char to write anyway.

So i guess it's better to let said char RIP, though he isn't 100% dead but can be considered dead like... stagnated.
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