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Old 03-08-2011, 08:09   #991
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Still i ended up disappointed that 1st one wasn't as good as other 2. I mean the standard is that the 1st thing that appears (be it book, movie what ever) is best and what follows sucks.

I'll continue reading tomorrow from Dreamer chapter 4. That kid looks interesting, talking telepathically to the main char O.O
When you feel disappointed its best to read through it yourself, change anything minor to make yourself feel better.
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Old 03-08-2011, 08:25   #992
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Old 03-08-2011, 09:35   #993
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When you feel disappointed its best to read through it yourself, change anything minor to make yourself feel better.
If somethings missing, add it.
You'll get used to it o.o

Whys that? xD
I already did that, it's just that what makes sense to me doesn't make sense to other people (either not enough explanation, not enough description, neologisms... )
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I already did that, it's just that what makes sense to me doesn't make sense to other people (either not enough explanation, not enough description, neologisms... )
What I do to counter that is put myself in the place of other characters and describe what I see.
Keep a certain character in your head for a day, it helps.
Even think up random scenes if necessary, another thing is to describe to yourself (in your head) how you're feeling and the surroundings near you.
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What I do to counter that is put myself in the place of other characters and describe what I see.
Keep a certain character in your head for a day, it helps.
Even think up random scenes if necessary, another thing is to describe to yourself (in your head) how you're feeling and the surroundings near you.
Already did that, it's not that the problem. Read and see what i mean. Idk if you ever had the feeling that the way you started doesn't even reflect what would happen, like 1st chapter barely containing any action or too much description and barely at 3rd chapter or so the action really starts happening.
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By the power of...Umm...uhhh.give me a minute on this...Gre...nah...DETO's va...maybe, maybe not...hold on hold on hold on, I'm thinking of something...By the power of...no,no,no...Aww screw this. I'll just say...Bump?
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By the power of...Umm...uhhh.give me a minute on this...Gre...nah...DETO's va...maybe, maybe not...hold on hold on hold on, I'm thinking of something...By the power of...no,no,no...Aww screw this. I'll just say...Bump?
You don't say bump, you go Yaaaaaaaaayayayayaaaaa like a ninja and jump in, rolling through the air with 2 katanas on your back. Then you proceed to kill any new***s you come across.
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New avy amuses me. Might be the alcohol typing tho.
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What are they? Vikings? O.o Soldiers?
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What are they? Vikings? O.o Soldiers?
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